What Do You Think of My Prologue for My Novel Dagger of Xian?
Blaise stared at the knife resting against Aiden’s neck, she feared for his life as much as her own, she knew that with one wrong move it could be the end for both of them she had to do this right.
She never knew how much she could love one person more than she loved herself, she never thought she would be drawn in just like all the boys she had drawn in to do as she wanted, but there was something about Aiden whenever she was near him her heart seemed to skip a beat.
Blaise was tired she had been fighting and travelling for to long, maybe it was time for her to settle down but there was no way she could do that, she was just too curious.
Blaise looked in Aiden’s calm eyes and saw the answer that she had been looking for, she didn’t need to settle down as long as she had Aiden by her side.
Love is a curious thing after all, I never believed it was meant for me, now I feel almost guilty for what I did to those boys back in Brazil she thought to herself, she thought she saw Aiden’s mouth twitch and spread in to a grin but when she looked properly it had vanished, she looked back up in to his eyes and saw a trace of amusement there.
Surely he hadn’t heard all that.
There was always a connection between the two of them and they never worked out why.
“Well, well I knew you would lead me here Miss Harming and you did” Blaise turned around to see a tall man standing there smiling he was the witches council head mentor, he was the one who told Blaise to go after the dagger and amulet.
“DR. Snowdon” Blaise said calmly, he just smiled “Nice to see you”
She threw the dagger out of her hand and it landed in the surrounding lava, she knew he wouldn’t get it now even if he did have powers though the likely hood was that he would have had them confiscated by now, but then the henchman standing near placed the knife around Aiden’s neck, her eyes widened with worry and fear as she stood watching in despair, what had she done? This was all her fault she had allowed Aiden to come with her and she had gotten them in to this mess and now he was going to die and she would never see him again, she would never see that beautiful face, those beautiful eyes, and his luxurious muscular body that she loved to cuddle in to so much.
Her vision became cloudy and everything was confusing, she could feel her knees knocking together as she looked in to the black, cold eyes of the witches council head mentor, she knew it was him that was doing it to her but she couldn’t do anything.
“Aiden” she shouted her vision had been completely cut off, she couldn’t hear anything, smell anything or anything else the only thing she had left was speech “Aiden what’s happening?”
“Now Miss Harming are you going to go and retrieve that dagger for me or am I going to have to leave you here to die with no senses whatsoever?” he demanded allowing the hearing side of the spell to lift .
“I’ll do anything, just let Aiden go he doesn’t understand about any of this, he’s not like us” Blaise cried and before she knew it the horrible spell lifted and she could see again, before she came here she would never ever put a human before herself but now here she was doing everything she could to protect him.
“What are you talking about Blaise… I love you and if you die, I die too… and what on earth don’t I understand?” replied a puzzled Aiden “I understand everything about you”
“No you don’t” Blaise replied “there are some things I haven’t told you”
“What?” smiled Aiden “Like the fact you’re a witch”
“How did you know that?” Blaise asked.
“I’ll explain later” he replied.
Yeah if we live that long Blaise thought.
the name has been changed to Shayla Pestle people so that was just a place holder that my friend told me to put
but any opinions and help would be much apreciated thanks ![]()
ok not to offend you or anything but have you by any chance read the night world series
blaise is a witch in that and her last names harmen (or sumit like that)
and theres the soulmate principle to which is where you have a very deep connection with someone and they die if they are human because they can know about the night world
=S
maybe your doing a fan fic?
xxx